I wrote this and posted it on my blog more than 3 years ago, but tonight, I went to find it because it's how I'm feeling. Oh how I love the beach...



i move in and out of dream and reality
watching the tide pools fill
with each ebb and flow
searching for shiny objects
to pocket and treasure
feeling the water kiss my skin
as it laps at me
then washes away again

the sun shines down
reflecting off the surface
hitting my eyes
making them sparkle
my skin becoming a warm
hue of pink
my hair
whipping freely
in the wind

my pants are rolled
up to my knee
but i don't control the waves
and sometimes
they wash over me
salty and wet
like a lover
and sometimes
i want to immerse myself
in them

love will find its level like water

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2 months, 3 weeks ago by Jodi C.

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    James B. replied May 4th
    Hey rate this posts before hand Jodi you've got me all worked up...
    But I don't control the waves
    and sometimes
    they wash over me
    salty and wet
    like a lover
    and sometimes
    i want to immerse myself
    in them
  • Jodi C. replied May 4th
    lol! yeah, i'm afraid my poetry tends to be a bit like that. this one is about falling in love.

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